Story first draft and ideas
Blue= Scenes
Red= Important Scenes
1. Gang related
storyline.
2. Trouble causing
gang
3. One gang member
finds a girl
4. Gang do not know
about this relationship
5. Girl doesn’t know
what past and what the gang member is like, she doesn’t know that he is a gang
member
6. He gets to know
her family and he gets close to her dad who is a police officer that has just
moved to the area
7. Gang start to get
suspicions about relationship as he hasn’t been with them for a while and
confront him
8. He denies the
relationship
9. He ignores texts
from his girlfriend
10.
They get into trouble when the new policemen arrests
on gang member and the other tries to attack the officer but in defence uses
his truncheon and puts the other gang member in hospital
11.
The other gang members plan to get back at the
policemen
12.
They see their gang member meet up with the girl and
they follow back to there house and see that the officer is her dad.
13.
The gang decides to throw an ultimatum at him,
giving him an opportunity to repay for what has happened to there mate.
14.
His girlfriend then finds out that he Is part of
that gang, but she understands that he has been with her when all those
problems were happening and asks him to leave them for good as they are holding
him back.
15.
He now has to make a final decision, Stick with the
girl he loves or go back to the group that he has grown up with and get back at
her dad?
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